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I had a dream one time.

I dreamed I was walking in a forest, and there were flowers and birds singing and I felt so happy.

But then the birds all flew away and all the flowers wilted when I touched them. And I looked up at the sky through the branches and the sky was cloudy, but I didn't remeber it being cloudy before.

And then it started to rain. And I was so scared because when it rained it wasn't rain. And I closed my eyes because I didn't want to see that the rain was all red and sticky.

And I felt so scared and I ran and ran past the empty trees and past the dying flowers and I ran and ran through the forest and all the time it was raining and getting darker and darker until I couldn't see anything anymore.

And then I was more scared than I was before.

Because even though I couldn't see anything, I knew that there was something out there. Out in the darkness.

And it didn't want to eat me. But it was waiting for me. And it was coming for me.

And I was so scared, and I kept on running. But I couldn't tell if I was moving because it was so dark and I couldn't see anything.

And I felt that thing that wanted me coming closer and closer behind me. And I got very cold, but I kept on running.

And then I saw a bright light, and I was so scared and I wanted to turn around but I couldn't and I kept running and running and the light and the thing behind me got closer and closer. And then I was very close to the bright light and the light

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me, and I was screaming and screaming until I couldn't scream anymore.

And that was my dream.
©2007-2009 ~the-lovely-kiiko
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Author's Comments

....Yeah. ^^;
Sweet dreams, guys.

I wanted it to sound like a little kid was telling about a dream. You will notice, please, that I never used the word 'nightmare'.

So, I want you guys to tell me what you think of this. Did the kid die? If so, did he or she go to heaven or hell? Was that bright light heaven? Then why did it "eat" the little kid?

If you liked this, please check out :iconcrookedsixpence:'s Never Woke Up. Garunteed to creep you out or your money back.

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:iconenchantedlust:
Creepy!!!!!!!!!!

That's so cool... creepy dream though.
That would really freak me out

I like it.

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You know you're in love when you can't fall asleep because reality is finally better than your dreams.
~Dr. Seuss
:icontater1:
Wow! That was scary! I have similar dreams. You wake up very fast and your sweating. When I woke up from a scary dream, I hit my head on my bunkbed! nice job though!

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:iconsunrikaiya:
Sweeeeeeeeeeet! Raining blood? Cool! (<~ Ish a total freak.) Thats not scary! That ish an awesome dream! I wanna have it! (Don't mind me, I'm just a scary person.)

That's Awesome Kiiko-chan!

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:iconilikekyo:
awesomeness

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*impersonating steriotypical gay voice*
I had a dream about snowmen. And they were throwing snowballs. I had a dream about snowmen and they were throwing snowballs.

^ some boys in high school can be plum weird
:iconthe-lovely-kiiko:
:) Thank you!
Yeah, I have dreams like that too! ^^;

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:iconthe-lovely-kiiko:
Thank you, thank you, I'm here all week. :D

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96% of the teenage population learned from a teacher. If you are a part of the 4% who learned how to spell 'respect', 'bananas', and 'bologna' from Aretha Franklin, Gwen Stefani, and Oscar Meyer, copy and paste this in your signature.
:iconthe-lovely-kiiko:
...Uh, thank you?

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96% of the teenage population learned from a teacher. If you are a part of the 4% who learned how to spell 'respect', 'bananas', and 'bologna' from Aretha Franklin, Gwen Stefani, and Oscar Meyer, copy and paste this in your signature.
:iconthe-lovely-kiiko:
:thanks: Thank you.

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96% of the teenage population learned from a teacher. If you are a part of the 4% who learned how to spell 'respect', 'bananas', and 'bologna' from Aretha Franklin, Gwen Stefani, and Oscar Meyer, copy and paste this in your signature.
:iconsunrikaiya:
XD

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Art and music are the two most beautiful languages in existence, they were meant to be together. They create a euphoria, a euphony, a lingua-franca. Not everyone can read or speak this language, but everyone understands.

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